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Ana's Journey Book 1- The Journey Begins

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Everything you read here is the actual book of Ana's Journey Book 1: The Journey Begins which will be in Amazon, Bookstores, Libraries, and selected schools.

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Title: Ana's Journey Book 1: The Journey Begins
Author: Ana J. Batista
Pages: 50 pages
Chapters: 11 in total

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Danishay's avatar
I'm spotting mistakes.

Start a new paragraph when a new character speaks, for example. When Cobalt and Lightning Scar were speaking, it's better to begin new paragraphs so it is easier for the reader to understand. And when you're done with the first chapter, go back and read over for mistakes. For example, if you leave a word out.

Original: 'Lightning Scar walked over to his mate and looked down to see some of beautifulness pups he had ever seen'
Correction: 'Lightning Scar walked over to his back and looked down to see some of the most beautiful puppies he had ever seen'.